Dec. 17th, 2007 (UTC)

  • 8:13 AM (UTC)
CUTE! *loves wonwon*

FYI, all names and anything that sounds non-Japanese (ie Okay) should be in Katakana, so, Ron Weasley = ロン ウェーズリー。Also... I would use うっています instead of うれします but that's really up to you I suppose.
Box 6 should probably be 今は十時です。(ima wa juu ji desu) クラスへ行きます。(kurasu e ikimasu) though... I keep wanting to put Snape in informal speech instead of polite speech and imagine him saying: "十時だろう!行け!"
Yeah... I'm gonna stop nit picking now. (Box 8 should be その、Instead of この cos harry is holding the apple, not ron =D *bricked*)


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